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Prayer of the Forgotten by ~DeathsDoors:iconDeathsDoors:



Oh Dear Lord,
Please do not let me,
Fall upon my sword,
In a hopeless despair,
That none have ever seen.

They look through,
My transparent soul,
Of which shall soon,
Be lost forever,
The devil's gold.

I was taken,
And then forgotten,
My memories forsaken,
By the hateful horde,
Of those always misbegotten.

Left lying there,
My heart turned to waste,
Ignored by people's cares,
They all step over me,
Make no decisions in haste.

Oh Dear God,
Please save my mind,
Every one of my thoughts,
Leads to insanity,
The last of my kind.

My life ruined,
I've been left behind,
The end is coming soon,
How shall I find Heaven,
If i've missed the last sign?

Forget about you!
You just raise your gun,
What can anyone do?
When you shoot into the sky,
And darken the sun!

My heartfelt prayers,
Have been sent up high,
Please take a care,
And listen to them,
Before I die...
©2008-2009 ~DeathsDoors
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Submitted: July 5, 2008
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I had trying a new rhyme scheme on this one. It goes abacb. I also made the first line of every stanza start with three words... That was hard I don't think i'll do that again. It was difficult to stay in it and still have the poem make some sort of sense. Enjoy. =)
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Haha thank you very much!!!

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Oh woah. This Is amazingg :D I love it :+fav:

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Thank you so muc XD

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You're welcome :pringles:

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